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April 24, 2015

4/24/2015

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This story is about a rat in the pound, and it's by rainbowpowers12 (#646879)! :) 
A rat was in the pound waiting for it to open and it did! "Every member on Chicken Smoothie will want to have me because i'm OMG SO RARE and i'm a dog." Sun jewel bragged. "Well I hope I get adopted, well I will be because i'm a cool cat." a cat bragged too. The rat sighed and looked at the horses and chickens in the front page. "Yes I might be adopted, well I hoped those guys get adopted too." the rat squeaked. They didn't get adopted sadly, maybe next time! Now the rat was on the front page, Sun jewel was right next to him. Everyone clicked on her but one person got her. "Well I feel happy for her, kinda." the rat was getting sadder and sadder. "THE POUND IS NOW CLOSE!" Tess said. Wait the rat didn't get adopted! "Sorry guys, but you are just gonna be in storage." Tess said sadly. The rat started to cry. "Nobody likes us because we don't look cool!" a chicken said. "Well, then we will find someone who does want us, all of us!" a horse said. The rat looked at them and smiled. "And I can't believe that they didn't get you, don't they know your're rare." another rat said. "Wait i'm rare?!" the rat was shocked! "Wait I feel proud, I will find you all a home!" the rare rat said loud. They all ran and they found the exit. "Yes!" they all said. They found the right player. He was at the door of the pound holding a sign saying. "I want the unwanted pets" His OC was, a rat. All the "unwanted" pets ran to him and hugged him. They all found a home, because of the rare rat. 
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Athenadawg
5/8/2015 11:09:19 am

This was awesome

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Crazynyancat
7/1/2015 06:47:01 am

So touching 10/10

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Elie McAndrew link
7/1/2015 12:05:14 pm

Awesome story!

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Red panda
11/10/2015 07:30:38 pm

waw so good! But a bit hard to read. Maybe skip a line when someone talks? But otherwise and amazing and fun story.

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